As I said previously, I have been rewriting the same part over and over again. I finally removed a large chunk of the scene that preceded the crap and tried again today. Somehow, I'm not sure that that half of the buddy pair in this story would act like that. I can't see him acting any other way, though.
I am pained by this. I feel like I've lost something important here. I feel like I should just start over. I'm not sure if this is my rabid depression or a desire not to suck so badly.
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